Sunday, January 20, 2013

Open Prompt Revision from 10/14 (1/20)

Prompt: Choose a character from a novel or play of recognized literary merit and write an essay in which you (a) briefly describe the standards of the fictional society in which the character exists and (b) show how the character is affected by and responds to those standards. In your essay do not merely summarize the plot.
      In Shakespeare’s time, women were raised to be wives.  They essentially had no power, were viewed as home makers and child bearers, and were completely controlled by their husbands.  On top of this, these “women” were often times still girls, being married off as early as fourteen.  In this society where women were at the mercy of men, Katherina of William Shakespeare’s The Taming of the Shrew, did not fit in.
            Shakespeare's character, Katherina, is not your average woman in this time period.  She is headstrong and not afraid for a moment to give her opinion to a man.  Katherina's younger sister, Bianca, on the other hand is absolutely perfect.  Bianca is young, beautiful, kind, and has captured the heart of more than one man in  Taming of the Shrew.  For example, after one of the male characters calls Katherina crazy, he says about Bianca, "But in the other’s silence do I see / Maid’s mild behavior and sobriety" (1.1.71-72). Essentially this quote says that one reason Bianca is so well loved is because she is quiet and well behaved like a wife should be.  Since Katherina knows she is not the woman Bianca is, the type of woman she needs to be to get a husband, she rebels from her society.  
            To deal with societies rejection of the "spinster", Katherina responds by acting like the most unattractive woman.  With full knowledge of what she is doing she openly insults a potential suitor when she says:
           I' faith, sir, you shall never need to fear.
           I wis it is not halfway to her heart.
           But if it were, doubt not her care should be
          To comb your noddle with a three-legged stool
          And paint your face and use you like a fool (1.1.60-65).
She gives off the attitude that she does not want or need a husband so to defy society's standard of what a woman ought to be.  Due to her dreadful manners, a man must be paid to "tame" her to become the willing wife that was so desirable.  In the end, Katherina is tamed despite her tireless efforts against it, and becomes a wife.  She fought to maintain her freedom by becoming a so-called "shrew", to make a statement to her own society that she is able to be an independent woman without a husband telling her what to do.
 
Question: After the block quotation am I supposed to indent the following sentence? It was originally one paragraph before the quote was added but I'm not positive what to do here.

1 comment:

  1. To answer your question, I don't think you are supposed to indent, so you did it right. Someone should probably double check on that. It seems like you made all of the appropriate changes to your piece that were suggested. Comparing this, to the original you have definitely improved, so nice job!! Keep up the good work

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